[maeve]

Follow your heart,it'll lead you to your dreams. Listen closely and you will discover many hidden treasure within you. Look to your soul for the truth that you're seeking. You friends and family can only guide you to the right path. Your heart will take you there the rest of the way. Your heart will open many doors for you along your journey. You'll discover many wonderful and scary things about who you are. It'll reveal many secrets that you were afraid to know. Sometimes you'll have many people that will try to lure you away from your heart. Yet don't let that discourage you. Your heart has the keys, that you need to live an enrich, and fulfilled life.You heart will never lie to you. Pay close attention to what it tells you. Your heart will show you how to maintain peace, even during heated situations. As long your heart is open you will be able to heal. Your heart is where all your love is stored. Never be afraid to believe what it tells you.

[maeve]

I am His daughter. I'm a spiritual being in a physical body. A person whose loving, and compassionate. Someone who believes that peace can bring people closer together. Someone who tries her best to do what is right. I am person who tires to always have an open heart. I am a lover who need to feel needed. I'm a strong believer in love. A solider of light, and truth. I am someone who believes we're here to help each other. I am a survivor, and a fighter. I'm a friend who want the best for everyone she cares about. I'm a person who want to reach out to people who are hurting. I am seeker for the truth. I am person who has gone through a lot, yet shines brighter today. I am person who never gives up. I am a writer. I am person who wants to make a difference. I am a sister to some of my closest friends. I am unique.

[maeve]

We will always have temptation. We can't just wish it away. Yet that doesn't mean we should give into it. They're way we can resist it. We can learn to help each other to remain strong when we're around it. Temptation can only lead us into trouble. It's also a way to see how strong our faith is. Sometimes if we're not careful we can fall back in our old ways. Temptation can be very clever in ways of coming in our lives. Some days the enticement can feel overwhelming. It can lead us down very dangerous paths. It can sneak in just as we feel , that we're confident. If we're not discrete it will control us. Some of us have different ways of resisting seduction. Satan will try his best to lure us away from our Creator. The Good news He will help us grow stronger through our temptations. We also have friends with us, so we don't have to withstand seduction alone. We can use prayer to avoid temptation.

[maeve]

What is beauty? Is it what the world is considered beautiful, or is it something more? Some think women on magazine who are air brushed are beautiful. Some think if you wear make up that will make you pretty. Others think that fancy are good looking. Some women regard men on tv as handsome. Some consider thin individuals are thought as pretty. Sometimes we look at a certain picture, and we say that's beautiful. Some of us have so much so much tragedy, and bitterness we forget to look for it. We rarely see beauty in everyday things. We're so busy doing stuff, we don't make time to see the gorgeous sunsets. Some of us stopped taking walks, and we totally miss the wonderful flowers. We get caught up in life, we don't appreciate the quiet and peaceful sunrises. Most of us are focused on external beauty. We don't really recognize the inner beauty that surround us. We forget a person can be beautiful. Even when they look plain on the outside. We don't see beauty that in their soul. There is beauty is all around us.

[Golder]

I'm sorry to say that but it is awful. Even if you took time to write all of this, you should have, at least, taken a bit more time to correct all the mistakes in it. I wouldn't call it proper poems, not even prose poems.
Take at least 5 more minutes to re-read yourself and run a spell-check, it's easy
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Golder
French dragon and proud to be

[maeve]

I appericate your opion. It does sting a little. But i will look past it. I DID do spell check.

[Golder]

I understand that it might sting and I understand that the spell-check will only find the words that are mispelled but not a word that is still correctly written but not the correct word.

You do have to understand that poems is not only find words that rhyme together and write a beautiful story, it's about rhythm as well and believe me, rhythm in a poem is VERY important. There's something called foot in a poem, it is very structured.
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Golder
French dragon and proud to be

[maeve]

Hate is a powerful word but, if only we give it power. We should focus on an even more powerful word love. Where ever love is you'll find peace. When love takes hold of you it will transform you. Sometimes if you let love flow through, you will allow it to restore your spirit. Your heart will slowly soften and grow. Love allows you to see things in a clearer prescriptive on things. You begin to feel joy run through your heart and, spirit. Love allows hope to grow and flourish in your soul. Love shines the brightest even during the darkest storms. Love can show up when we're not paying attention. It will open many doors for you. Once you allow love to nourish your soul, everything inside will come back to life. Your life will start to have meaning again. When you have love inside, you learn to have compassion for others. Love gives you freedom to be yourself. It brings out the good in you, in others. Your heart will feel lighter.

[Rossenod]

I like your works, Maeve. You put a lot of work into them and more important than that, you listen to your heart more than to the words of others. That's good.
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--Ross

[maeve]

I am the child on the streets you see everyday. I have no home or, family who loves me. I cry alone at night, yet no one is around to hear me. I have to beg for food or dig through garbage, just so I can survive. There's no soft bed for me to lie in at night. I have no mom or dad to tuck me, or tell me stories. When I go to sleep,all I have to lay in is a bench. They are no warm blanket to keep cozy when it's cold. There's no one there comfort me when I am frigthend and alone. I have no friends to have a tea party with. My days are filled with loneiness and sorrow. I don't have a mommy who'll take me shopping. My face is staind with blood from the tears I have cried. My body is weak and frail from malnurtion. The only water I drink comes from the dirty rivers. There's no one around to tell me everything will be ok.

[maeve]

When you give your life to the Lord. Your life will transform. You’ll see people with a kinder heart. You’re life start to have a new meaning to it. You being begin to radiate with His love. Your spirit starts to stir with love and passion. You realize everyday is a precious gift to cherish. You’ll find a kind of strength. There will be a brighter sparkle in your eyes. The things that used to be so important to you, will be trivial to you. The air you breathe will be sweeter. The stuff that used to bother you, won’t even phase you anymore. You will wake up every morning feeling rested and renewed. You begin to feel like a whole new person. Slowly your heart start to open allowing room for love to grow and blossom like a flower. You’ll have a song in your heart. You learn to listen closely to your heart and soul. You’ll be able to hear His soft whisper and guidance.